I have re-written parts of this poem, does the personification work?

I did not see the original. I've taken off the kid gloves because you have grown into a contender. In my opinion, the word "an" is the only clunker in this effort. I would rather fall 'in' the river. Just me.

Christan is overrated and not that talented?

hes not overrated imo he showed he could be main event in tna before it went to crap in 07 but you are overestimating his push the wwecw belt is not that prestigous of a belt it really shouldnt be called ecw cause when was the last time it was defended in an extreme match im seriously asking cause i truly dont know when. when other wrestlers have returned from orginizations they got as big of pushes or bigger than christian plus vince doesnt like him so hes probably not going to win anyway. BQ: Swagger cause wwe needs some kind of heel other than mayrese to hold a title.

What's the best 9mm JHP ammo for a Glock 26?

your Winchester elites will work fine in it. 124 grain is a heavier 9mm round so it is slower moving than the common 115 grain. 124 grain would be best for heavier impact with less over of the target.

Can someone read my cover letter?

Get rid of the "XXX" at the end! Also, get an accented "e" on the word "resume" if you can. And say "attached" instead of "enclosed" unless you are actually writing a physical letter.

Would they notice/bother if a non-college guy crash one of those frat college party to hook up?

how would they notice? would they really care if you are not from the college, or as they say, a brother?? can you pay your way thru? I just find college girls are hot and easy than the rest of them at clubs or bars.. ^over 30... not good..

Blue screen of death incidence gone for now; what happened?

After I reformatted my laptop, I had several incidences of the blue screen of death, although I didn't know anything about it then. (Well I think it is the blue screen of death--the screen suddenly becmes blue saying there was an error, then reverts back to the windows program just as suddenly with a dialog box saying the system's recovered from a serious error.) The last time I had it, I had to reboot--the system wasn't reverting back to windows. For several weeks I didn't use the laptop for long periods, then gradually I began increasing my usage times. Surprisingly but not unwelcomingly, I haven't had any instances of the blue screen of death since then. I was thinking it was because my hard drive was getting old, but logic (faulty, maybe?) tells me I should be getting more instances of the blue screen. Any ideas on what happened then?

What should my 4 year old know before going to school?

They told my son he needed to know: how to write first & last name, phone number , adress, city , state, count to 100. Other things I did to prepare him were doing site words .& teaching him all the sounds each letter in the alphabet makes.